Hey Dan, I like your e-portfolio! It was really interesting to read the pieces of writing that you chose. I like your definition essay called “Determination.” I think that this essay shows your strengths and improvements as a writer. Also, you did a great job on your compare and contrast essay “The Big Unit and King Felix.” I’m not a big sports fan, so it wasn’t that interesting topic for me, but it is very well written essay! Good job on your e-portfolio:)
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Hey Dan,
I like your e-portfolio! It was really interesting to read the pieces of writing that you chose. I like your definition essay called “Determination.” I think that this essay shows your strengths and improvements as a writer. Also, you did a great job on your compare and contrast essay “The Big Unit and King Felix.” I’m not a big sports fan, so it wasn’t that interesting topic for me, but it is very well written essay!
Good job on your e-portfolio:)
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